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How obvious do we have to make ourselves?
Screaming for attention
But our words fall hollow on deaf ears
Each minute, another step towards the edge
Faling off the deep end, diving into the pool unknown
The undertow drags us down, drowning our spirits
And our voices.

Drenched in our own self misery
We become blind to the rest of us
We're all screeching at the deaf
And wondering on pitch-black paths

Hordes of us
We assemble unknowingly
Reaching ever so high out of the dellusion
Through the deluge
Rebirthing our selves into the light
Only to find

We're in an ocean
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:iconlumynescence:
I love this. :)

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Whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
:iconpeanut-chan:
love the last line best of all :)

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I <3 you
:icondiaryofafreak:
too cool. seriously cool

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PNADA

()_()
( ^.^)
( " " )
* i iz happy
:icona-freakin-rpg-gamer:
Thank you milady :)

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"Happiness, Wrath, Anxiety, Fright,
Sorrow, Remorse, Brash, Delight
When mixed together cause quite the commotion,
But you should never hide from your =RawEm0tion"
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Thank you ma'dam :)

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"Happiness, Wrath, Anxiety, Fright,
Sorrow, Remorse, Brash, Delight
When mixed together cause quite the commotion,
But you should never hide from your =RawEm0tion"
:icona-freakin-rpg-gamer:
Thank you very much :)

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"Happiness, Wrath, Anxiety, Fright,
Sorrow, Remorse, Brash, Delight
When mixed together cause quite the commotion,
But you should never hide from your =RawEm0tion"
:iconpeanut-chan:
You're welcome my good sir

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Do you spend a fortune on those late night pre-paid television scams in search of the perfect blend of steak knife and non-stick frying pan?
I <3 you
:icondiaryofafreak:
welcome monsieur

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PNADA

()_()
( ^.^)
( " " )
* i iz happy
:iconvetchvespers:
Reach out and touch somebody man...
Nice poem. I like all your water imagery.

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